# #twitterfiction The Alcove - Chapter 6 -
# Stephen woke with a start the sunlight now streaming in through the window directly illuminating his retinas inducing a throbbing headache.
# "Was last night a dream?" checking his right side pants pocket. There it was. A wave of relief crashed over him. "I've still got the watch!"
# Glancing at the disheveled room and feeling the pounding in his head he knew last nights' trip cost him more than some much needed sleep.
# It was almost 10:30AM and he was expected to make an appearance in the main house before noon for sure, he set out starting his day.
# The entire family had gathered at the passing of his father, and the condolences were shared along with some tears, Stephen felt set free.
# He was not particularly close to his father, he guessed that no son had, especially with a busy father trying to make his way in this world.
# The past years especially they had drifted apart. Stephen moved to New York and had visited only once, right near the end.
# The awkward but necessary issue of dad's estate was to be resolved before immediate family headed home, he had been gone for three days.
# Stephen was the eldest yet his lack of a wife and family tended to alienate him from his two sisters Patricia, next oldest and baby Emily.
# They had both married early and now each had a large family, filling the main house. Stephen had felt excluded but now it didn't matter.
# Stephen had seen a glimpse into his future and it contained a long life, a loving wife and a peaceful passing. He headed to the main house.
# The chaos of the kids that swirled in the large estate house was the way he remembered his childhood, full of laughter and teasing.
# Patricia and Emily loved to cook since they could hold a spoon. All three got along great, the girls trying new recipes and Stephen tasting.
# This morning smell of waffles and fresh fruit wafted through the house, he helped as best he could with the berry-filled chaos and cleaning.
# At two they would meet with the lawyer to see about the state of affairs. Stephen knew Patricia loved the house and was looking to move in.
# Emily already had a great house as it was custom built (and eternally being renovated) by her husband a successful general contractor.
# Stephen's mom, devastated by her husband's death and vowed she would always live in the house, it would be too overwhelming for her.
# As it was Emily and Patricia would help her out with the laundry each week and do a bit of cleaning, She was getting older and more frail.
# The unofficial plan was for Patricia and her family to move in and help mom out around the house, Emily would also pop by and lend a hand.
# Stephen wanted to see the house stay in the family and was amiable with Patricia supporting Mom. He wanted one more look in the library.
# It was rumored that Grandpa had penned a journal of his escapades for the year he was gone. Stephen knew there was a lifetime in that book.
# The meeting came and went with a flurry of legalese and jargon. The deed to the house was set to their mother's name next up was Patricia's.
# There were still considerable holdings that Dad had never spoken of, that now Stephen was beginning to understand the origins of. Gramps.
# Every thing was left in his mom's name so she would have access to any funds she required, save the trusts set up for each of the kids.
# The sisters were honestly grateful that each of their children would be set for life. They had ever been poor, now they never would be.
# There was a large nest egg for Stephen as well but money can't replace people. Stephen had been on the verge of retirement for ten years.
# Returning to the house the sisters shared the news of the arrangements with their husbands. Then Patricia took Stephen aside for a word.
# "Stephen, I know you said you were ok with me moving into the house, there is always room for one more." she smiled genuinely.
# "I think I would just get in the way." he paused "I think I am going to follow in Gramp's footsteps and take a year"
# Patricia perked up "You are finally going to go? You have always talked about traveling around the globe! How exciting!"
# "I am finally going to do it!" he announced, "I am going around the world!" his eyes now sparkled in anticipation. "I am leaving in a week!"
# "And when you get back you know you are always welcome here! This is your house too!" She said and she meant it.
# Rejoining the group he shared the news of the new adventure with the others, the childrens' eyes grew wide at the thought of the adventure.
Sunday, June 28, 2009
The Alcove - Chapter 5 -
# #twitterfiction The Alcove - Chapter 5 -
# Gramps or Sam as he was called by friends always had tall tales from faraway lands and adventures too fantastic to be true, like Egypt.
# Egypt and everything about the tombs and mummies seemed to be enough to fuel an adventuring grandson's wildest dreams for years.
# Sam, an average man in all respects - had somehow stumbled upon the secret to life: He had always fully lived every moment of his life.
# The Irony of fate is that you tend to get more of what you already have, and not something that you don't. This was much the same.
# Sam had told the story only once - he had traveled for four days to New York to meet his cousin who had sent word he was moving to America.
# When Sam arrived at to meet Francis, he also met a handful of illegals that had stowed away on the ship that Francis had befriended at sea.
# From what Sam had seen of other illegals he was hesitant at first to engage them, but after half a day he had warmed up to them like kin.
# For the entire summer the troupe was inseparable. Stories from across the sea light the fire of Sam's imagination and a fire in his belly.
# Reginald the lanky one with the unkempt hair, not for lack of combing, had a grandfather who lived in Chicago, and planned to visit him.
# Reginald was quirky with never a want in the world. He carried beneath his unruly locks a secret. Summer waned and their paths parted.
# As harvest time approached, Sam was needed back at home but the few roaring weeks he had spent in the city had felt like a lifetime.
# Francis came to stay with Sam - inseparable by day, spending their nights spinning adventure stories of daring adventure by lantern light.
# The harvest came and went, and the two set out on adventure whenever they could, taking numerous trips to the big city with wide eyes.
# Sam was celebrating yet another birthday in the city with his cousin, when to his utmost surprise he was met by Reginald from the troupe.
# The reunion celebration that ensued was never mentioned only that Reginald handed Sam a handkerchief and in it was the enchanted watch.
# Sam clearly remembered the first time he saw it, a moment burned into his mind. He remembers unwrapping it, the key to living in the moment.
# Reginald said that he had one too. His Grandfather was making these watches. Reginald did not know how. Then the fun began.
# Francis also received a watch and the three traveled through dimension to the place where they were kings of time itself.
# In a city with millions of people, pranks were endless, and benefits plentiful. Within a span of what would have been a week they were rich.
# It started innocently enough with a meal or two, then picking pockets of the mannequins around them - they tried to never take too much.
# Francis was quite the ladies' man and would plant a juicy wet one on any pretty face he came across. Sam showed the most restraint.
# Reginald was infinitely clever with elaborate setups that ultimately ended with an upturned bucket of water on some poor chap's head.
# They were unstoppable.
# The "reentry" was a vomit inducing world war two preview - that seemed to always end the same. Dead in a muddy trench body aching. So grim.
# Reginald's grandfather would only share the fact that their family had been making these devices for generations in various forms forever.
# Wanting to put their new power to "good use" Reginald ever the mastermind - orchestrated a bank heist. This was big time!
# Orchestrated may be too good of a word - the three men touched their watches, walked in when the vault was open and took what they needed.
# Reginald still took full credit for the success and had already scouted a hiding place for the loot. The world was theirs. The World!
# They had spent around a month on the other side and Francis was suffering from the traumatic images that he saw on reentry. Too much death.
# Reginald saw that Francis was not handling the new power well. He seemed to be less and less engaged, the loot was divided. Francis left.
# Francis was never quite right after that. He lived well off the spoils but he never married and lived out his days on the family farm.
# Sam fearing the same fate began to regulate his own use of the power. "I don't want to see the horrors of my own death anymore." he thought.
# The sense of adventure was too large to ignore. He vowed he would travel the world for a year and only use the watch to "pay" for the trip.
# And Travel he did, Sam "jumped" on a steamer set for Europe and slept for most of the two weeks, constantly vigilant of pick pockets.
# He had plan to travel the world with Reginald but Reg had disappeared one day and never came back.
# Sam wondered what would happen if you died on the other side.
# He left a note for Reginald in the stash of loot. He would be sure to find it there. Reginald was constantly in the stash - adding to it.
# The travel had landed Sam with thousands of stories, hundreds of memories. He then found his way home where he courted his old school flame.
# She was feisty, with quick wits and a youthful look about her - or was he just looking older? They set out to spend their lives together.
# Gramps or Sam as he was called by friends always had tall tales from faraway lands and adventures too fantastic to be true, like Egypt.
# Egypt and everything about the tombs and mummies seemed to be enough to fuel an adventuring grandson's wildest dreams for years.
# Sam, an average man in all respects - had somehow stumbled upon the secret to life: He had always fully lived every moment of his life.
# The Irony of fate is that you tend to get more of what you already have, and not something that you don't. This was much the same.
# Sam had told the story only once - he had traveled for four days to New York to meet his cousin who had sent word he was moving to America.
# When Sam arrived at to meet Francis, he also met a handful of illegals that had stowed away on the ship that Francis had befriended at sea.
# From what Sam had seen of other illegals he was hesitant at first to engage them, but after half a day he had warmed up to them like kin.
# For the entire summer the troupe was inseparable. Stories from across the sea light the fire of Sam's imagination and a fire in his belly.
# Reginald the lanky one with the unkempt hair, not for lack of combing, had a grandfather who lived in Chicago, and planned to visit him.
# Reginald was quirky with never a want in the world. He carried beneath his unruly locks a secret. Summer waned and their paths parted.
# As harvest time approached, Sam was needed back at home but the few roaring weeks he had spent in the city had felt like a lifetime.
# Francis came to stay with Sam - inseparable by day, spending their nights spinning adventure stories of daring adventure by lantern light.
# The harvest came and went, and the two set out on adventure whenever they could, taking numerous trips to the big city with wide eyes.
# Sam was celebrating yet another birthday in the city with his cousin, when to his utmost surprise he was met by Reginald from the troupe.
# The reunion celebration that ensued was never mentioned only that Reginald handed Sam a handkerchief and in it was the enchanted watch.
# Sam clearly remembered the first time he saw it, a moment burned into his mind. He remembers unwrapping it, the key to living in the moment.
# Reginald said that he had one too. His Grandfather was making these watches. Reginald did not know how. Then the fun began.
# Francis also received a watch and the three traveled through dimension to the place where they were kings of time itself.
# In a city with millions of people, pranks were endless, and benefits plentiful. Within a span of what would have been a week they were rich.
# It started innocently enough with a meal or two, then picking pockets of the mannequins around them - they tried to never take too much.
# Francis was quite the ladies' man and would plant a juicy wet one on any pretty face he came across. Sam showed the most restraint.
# Reginald was infinitely clever with elaborate setups that ultimately ended with an upturned bucket of water on some poor chap's head.
# They were unstoppable.
# The "reentry" was a vomit inducing world war two preview - that seemed to always end the same. Dead in a muddy trench body aching. So grim.
# Reginald's grandfather would only share the fact that their family had been making these devices for generations in various forms forever.
# Wanting to put their new power to "good use" Reginald ever the mastermind - orchestrated a bank heist. This was big time!
# Orchestrated may be too good of a word - the three men touched their watches, walked in when the vault was open and took what they needed.
# Reginald still took full credit for the success and had already scouted a hiding place for the loot. The world was theirs. The World!
# They had spent around a month on the other side and Francis was suffering from the traumatic images that he saw on reentry. Too much death.
# Reginald saw that Francis was not handling the new power well. He seemed to be less and less engaged, the loot was divided. Francis left.
# Francis was never quite right after that. He lived well off the spoils but he never married and lived out his days on the family farm.
# Sam fearing the same fate began to regulate his own use of the power. "I don't want to see the horrors of my own death anymore." he thought.
# The sense of adventure was too large to ignore. He vowed he would travel the world for a year and only use the watch to "pay" for the trip.
# And Travel he did, Sam "jumped" on a steamer set for Europe and slept for most of the two weeks, constantly vigilant of pick pockets.
# He had plan to travel the world with Reginald but Reg had disappeared one day and never came back.
# Sam wondered what would happen if you died on the other side.
# He left a note for Reginald in the stash of loot. He would be sure to find it there. Reginald was constantly in the stash - adding to it.
# The travel had landed Sam with thousands of stories, hundreds of memories. He then found his way home where he courted his old school flame.
# She was feisty, with quick wits and a youthful look about her - or was he just looking older? They set out to spend their lives together.
Monday, June 22, 2009
The Alcove - Chapter 4 -
# #twitterfiction The Alcove - Chapter 4 -
# Turning the unique time piece over in his hand a knot of tension rose within, he had never seen Gramps use this device, nor used it himself.
# Stephen's dad had gone ballistic and took the watch from him and hid it away. Gramps was just joking right? This was just a novelty watch.
# How could a novelty watch still be ticking after years? How had he resisted his obsession till the death of his father three days prior?
# Ever since he first saw that watch Stephen doubted it's godlike power to stop time. but the evidence was plain, his grandfather died young.
# Gramps did die young, he had all the vim and vigor of a man half his age, and wisdom beyond a man twice his years. And now his dad too.
# He was the only man in the family left, with one sister, no uncles or children the bloodline would end with him. The realization landed.
# Stephen felt anxious, but didn't want to put the world on hold to trudge through rain. What of visions of your life without stopping time?
# He felt scared to sleep with such a valued object not locked up safe, he had never felt more vulnerable, "No one even knows." he said aloud.
# In the darkness of the room he realized the irrational fear was stifling and he felt the paranoia rising. Not wanting to drown, he did it.
# Closing his eyes he gently pulled the winding knob on the watch, and waited...silence. The slits of his eyes slowly opened, he looked down.
# The hands ominously had snapped to high noon and were now rotating like a normal watch, he did a double take - it must be like a stopwatch.
# Looking around everything was just as it had been, catching the light of the moon he saw the droplets of rain hanging in the air outside.
# "Gramps! It Works!" He half expected to see his grandfather as the normal took on the surreal. He threw on his clothes and slicker and left.
# Running through the drops, he was a child going swimming for the first time, soaked to the bone and smiling, this is living in the moment!
# There were so many things he wanted to test and try, how did this world work? Were there other people here? He realized he should "get back"
# Returning to the room drenched for the second time that night, he collapsed into the chair at the table and slowly drew out his prize.
# He focused on the movement and pressed the winding knob, the hands paused, he froze, then they reversed to their usual yet, unnatural orbit.
# Stephen had enjoyed time and space all to himself for a full 25 minutes, and he felt back to normal, once the hands had switched direction.
# Ominously the hands counted down the moments till midnight and the rejoining of the others as Stephen would rejoin time itself once again.
# Everything jarred out of focus and Stephen struggled to regain the ability to discern what lay before him. He was unable to breathe. Panic.
# And as quickly as he realized his lack of breath, it returned, his eyes began adjusting to the brightness and skin felt electric.
# There was a beautiful sunset before him, his body was translucent, he was unable to move or touch anything, suspended, helpless, weightless.
# He was rushed forward, compelled by a force that moved quickly with instant acceleration. Rushing full speed closer and closer to a house.
# Full stop. He had traveled 20 miles from the top of a nearby peak to the porch of a humble sea side cabin in an instant. Time froze.
# Forced into his view was an old man he instantly recognized as an older version of himself, he was not alone. She was beside him in silence.
# Holding hands the two looked out over the water toward the receding sun as it danced on the horizon. Fixated on their faces he sensed peace.
# She had a face he did not know but instantly trusted, the older version of himself looked to be late seventies, she looked about the same.
# Desperately, he tried to speak to his older self, but could not break the silence, his voice was stricken from him. He was only a spectator.
# Stephen was watching the moments he would now never experience. These would have been the last 25 minutes of his life. They played out.
# Utter tranquility, a peace he had never experienced washed over them with each of the crashing waves on the shore. He tightened his grip.
# She tightened back. More tension, with force. She looked over concerned but resigned. He closed his eyes, opening them to meet her gaze.
# Stephen was watching himself die. Fighting the pain, his aged frame stiffened. Her loving look offered help, it was waved off. Heart attack.
# Gently brushing back his hair, their eyes locked in an embrace a lifetime long, He slowly let go of this life and she began to weep quietly.
# Stephen felt such a deep connection to this woman, he felt at ease. Then the question hit him - who was this woman? How did they meet? when?
# She wiped the sweat from his brow, he let go his final breath. Stephen was instantly pulling back to the perch on the hilltop. Focus lost.
# The choking sensation returned, as did the vague shapes of the room. Checking the watch it read midnight and kept counting down the hours.
# The future that was shown to him had been his future before he had used the watch. The price for using it:That was not his future anymore.
# His mind exhausted and invigorated, horrified and confused, Stephen tried to sleep. Overwhelmed, over stimulated he willed himself to sleep.
# Turning the unique time piece over in his hand a knot of tension rose within, he had never seen Gramps use this device, nor used it himself.
# Stephen's dad had gone ballistic and took the watch from him and hid it away. Gramps was just joking right? This was just a novelty watch.
# How could a novelty watch still be ticking after years? How had he resisted his obsession till the death of his father three days prior?
# Ever since he first saw that watch Stephen doubted it's godlike power to stop time. but the evidence was plain, his grandfather died young.
# Gramps did die young, he had all the vim and vigor of a man half his age, and wisdom beyond a man twice his years. And now his dad too.
# He was the only man in the family left, with one sister, no uncles or children the bloodline would end with him. The realization landed.
# Stephen felt anxious, but didn't want to put the world on hold to trudge through rain. What of visions of your life without stopping time?
# He felt scared to sleep with such a valued object not locked up safe, he had never felt more vulnerable, "No one even knows." he said aloud.
# In the darkness of the room he realized the irrational fear was stifling and he felt the paranoia rising. Not wanting to drown, he did it.
# Closing his eyes he gently pulled the winding knob on the watch, and waited...silence. The slits of his eyes slowly opened, he looked down.
# The hands ominously had snapped to high noon and were now rotating like a normal watch, he did a double take - it must be like a stopwatch.
# Looking around everything was just as it had been, catching the light of the moon he saw the droplets of rain hanging in the air outside.
# "Gramps! It Works!" He half expected to see his grandfather as the normal took on the surreal. He threw on his clothes and slicker and left.
# Running through the drops, he was a child going swimming for the first time, soaked to the bone and smiling, this is living in the moment!
# There were so many things he wanted to test and try, how did this world work? Were there other people here? He realized he should "get back"
# Returning to the room drenched for the second time that night, he collapsed into the chair at the table and slowly drew out his prize.
# He focused on the movement and pressed the winding knob, the hands paused, he froze, then they reversed to their usual yet, unnatural orbit.
# Stephen had enjoyed time and space all to himself for a full 25 minutes, and he felt back to normal, once the hands had switched direction.
# Ominously the hands counted down the moments till midnight and the rejoining of the others as Stephen would rejoin time itself once again.
# Everything jarred out of focus and Stephen struggled to regain the ability to discern what lay before him. He was unable to breathe. Panic.
# And as quickly as he realized his lack of breath, it returned, his eyes began adjusting to the brightness and skin felt electric.
# There was a beautiful sunset before him, his body was translucent, he was unable to move or touch anything, suspended, helpless, weightless.
# He was rushed forward, compelled by a force that moved quickly with instant acceleration. Rushing full speed closer and closer to a house.
# Full stop. He had traveled 20 miles from the top of a nearby peak to the porch of a humble sea side cabin in an instant. Time froze.
# Forced into his view was an old man he instantly recognized as an older version of himself, he was not alone. She was beside him in silence.
# Holding hands the two looked out over the water toward the receding sun as it danced on the horizon. Fixated on their faces he sensed peace.
# She had a face he did not know but instantly trusted, the older version of himself looked to be late seventies, she looked about the same.
# Desperately, he tried to speak to his older self, but could not break the silence, his voice was stricken from him. He was only a spectator.
# Stephen was watching the moments he would now never experience. These would have been the last 25 minutes of his life. They played out.
# Utter tranquility, a peace he had never experienced washed over them with each of the crashing waves on the shore. He tightened his grip.
# She tightened back. More tension, with force. She looked over concerned but resigned. He closed his eyes, opening them to meet her gaze.
# Stephen was watching himself die. Fighting the pain, his aged frame stiffened. Her loving look offered help, it was waved off. Heart attack.
# Gently brushing back his hair, their eyes locked in an embrace a lifetime long, He slowly let go of this life and she began to weep quietly.
# Stephen felt such a deep connection to this woman, he felt at ease. Then the question hit him - who was this woman? How did they meet? when?
# She wiped the sweat from his brow, he let go his final breath. Stephen was instantly pulling back to the perch on the hilltop. Focus lost.
# The choking sensation returned, as did the vague shapes of the room. Checking the watch it read midnight and kept counting down the hours.
# The future that was shown to him had been his future before he had used the watch. The price for using it:That was not his future anymore.
# His mind exhausted and invigorated, horrified and confused, Stephen tried to sleep. Overwhelmed, over stimulated he willed himself to sleep.
The Alcove - Chapter 3 -
# #twitterfiction The Alcove - Chapter 3 -
# His first memory was of his Grandfather, he was a very wild child and everyone commented on how much they were alike. Two peas in a pod.
# The estate was sprawling and Stephen would spend most of his time just adventuring about, catching frogs or crickets and building forts.
# His Grandpa would always encourage him to be more adventurous than either of his parents wanted him to be. Grandpa had a secret.
# Stephen and his "Gramps" would spend all afternoon staring at the clouds, naming the pictures the sky drew. These memories were fond.
# The first time Stephen had noticed there was something "different" about Gramps was when he was 10, memorable as it was on his birthday.
# When trying to figure out the riddle of how much older Gramps was, Stephen noticed that he looked a fair bit older than his Grandmother.
# Ever one to be mannerly he didn't mention it at the time, but stored the thought for later, he solved the riddle and blew out the candles.
# Stephen had asked Gramps thousands of questions as they would wander the grounds, but there was one growing question he dared not ask.
# His father away on business more than half the year, his grandparents were as much in charge as mom, and this sat well with Stephen.
# He liked the recklessness his Grandfather had in his eyes and his gentle way. Father was the polar opposite, focusing the business of life.
# One week before graduation, he received a very special gift from his Grandfather, not wrapped in a box, but simply folded in a handkerchief.
# How can the best day of your life also be the worst?
# Stephen held the pocket watch in his hands and had thanked Gramps with a huge hug. "A good watch is the mark of a good man" Gramps said.
# Gramps had taken Stephen aside to explain the new responsibilities that accompanied the timepiece, they seemed fantastical.
# "The first thing to note" said Gramps as if it were rehearsed, "is the hands move opposite of common watches, this is no common watch."
# Stephen had already noticed, but played along and pretended to rediscover the movement, looking to his Grandfather to continue.
# He had thought it a gag or a watchmaker's mistake! Why would anyone create a watch that ran backward? He sensed Gramps holding back a story.
# "Secondly" Gramps continued "Is that this watch never needs to be wound!" the look on Stephen's face was priceless.
# "Never?" Stephen examined the watch and moved to test the theory.
# Gramps snatched it out of his hand before he could blink and looked into his eyes with a somber glare. "let me finish!" he blurted out.
# Stephen was taken aback and felt sheepish. Gramps instantly gave him a smile that let him know everything was good, but he needed to listen.
# Holding up the timepiece, he looked Stephen in the eye and pointed "To wind this watch press this button."he blinked "then the hands stop."
# He leaned in "If the hands of this watch stop, Time will stand still for all but you."
# Stephen laughed, then caught the gaze of his elder. He must be joking! The gaze was steady. He flashed back to his birthday and the candles.
# "What are you saying Gramps? That this watch can stop time?" The fire in his eyes now glowed red hot as he raised an eyebrow. "Yes" he said.
# "There is one catch" his tone now deathly serious "for each moment you stop time for others you must live it twice!"
# "Is that what happened to you?" Stephen only realized after he had said it that he shouldn't have. He needed to know.
# "Yes, that is why I am passing this on to you, I have traveled the world, touched the pyramids, I have seen all I have ever wanted to see."
# "You have been to the pyramids? How? When?" Stephen's mind raced as a wave of a thousand questions spilled out.
# "I will answer those later" Gramps calmed him "There is a consequence for stopping time. You must live it twice over." what did that mean?
# "Twice over?" Stephen was unable to fathom what was being said, his mind still wandering to exotic locals with scorpions and sphinx.
# "If you stop the watch you find all those around you frozen. you are alone with your thoughts, for the better or for the worse."
# Gramps continued "You will have run of the earth, go where you will, eat what you wish, borrow what you need, then reset the watch..."
# He paused "...once the watch is reset you see a vision of your life. if the watch was stopped for an hour your vision will last an hour..."
# He swallowed hard "...your vision will be of the last hour of your life as it would have been had you not stopped time."
# His first memory was of his Grandfather, he was a very wild child and everyone commented on how much they were alike. Two peas in a pod.
# The estate was sprawling and Stephen would spend most of his time just adventuring about, catching frogs or crickets and building forts.
# His Grandpa would always encourage him to be more adventurous than either of his parents wanted him to be. Grandpa had a secret.
# Stephen and his "Gramps" would spend all afternoon staring at the clouds, naming the pictures the sky drew. These memories were fond.
# The first time Stephen had noticed there was something "different" about Gramps was when he was 10, memorable as it was on his birthday.
# When trying to figure out the riddle of how much older Gramps was, Stephen noticed that he looked a fair bit older than his Grandmother.
# Ever one to be mannerly he didn't mention it at the time, but stored the thought for later, he solved the riddle and blew out the candles.
# Stephen had asked Gramps thousands of questions as they would wander the grounds, but there was one growing question he dared not ask.
# His father away on business more than half the year, his grandparents were as much in charge as mom, and this sat well with Stephen.
# He liked the recklessness his Grandfather had in his eyes and his gentle way. Father was the polar opposite, focusing the business of life.
# One week before graduation, he received a very special gift from his Grandfather, not wrapped in a box, but simply folded in a handkerchief.
# How can the best day of your life also be the worst?
# Stephen held the pocket watch in his hands and had thanked Gramps with a huge hug. "A good watch is the mark of a good man" Gramps said.
# Gramps had taken Stephen aside to explain the new responsibilities that accompanied the timepiece, they seemed fantastical.
# "The first thing to note" said Gramps as if it were rehearsed, "is the hands move opposite of common watches, this is no common watch."
# Stephen had already noticed, but played along and pretended to rediscover the movement, looking to his Grandfather to continue.
# He had thought it a gag or a watchmaker's mistake! Why would anyone create a watch that ran backward? He sensed Gramps holding back a story.
# "Secondly" Gramps continued "Is that this watch never needs to be wound!" the look on Stephen's face was priceless.
# "Never?" Stephen examined the watch and moved to test the theory.
# Gramps snatched it out of his hand before he could blink and looked into his eyes with a somber glare. "let me finish!" he blurted out.
# Stephen was taken aback and felt sheepish. Gramps instantly gave him a smile that let him know everything was good, but he needed to listen.
# Holding up the timepiece, he looked Stephen in the eye and pointed "To wind this watch press this button."he blinked "then the hands stop."
# He leaned in "If the hands of this watch stop, Time will stand still for all but you."
# Stephen laughed, then caught the gaze of his elder. He must be joking! The gaze was steady. He flashed back to his birthday and the candles.
# "What are you saying Gramps? That this watch can stop time?" The fire in his eyes now glowed red hot as he raised an eyebrow. "Yes" he said.
# "There is one catch" his tone now deathly serious "for each moment you stop time for others you must live it twice!"
# "Is that what happened to you?" Stephen only realized after he had said it that he shouldn't have. He needed to know.
# "Yes, that is why I am passing this on to you, I have traveled the world, touched the pyramids, I have seen all I have ever wanted to see."
# "You have been to the pyramids? How? When?" Stephen's mind raced as a wave of a thousand questions spilled out.
# "I will answer those later" Gramps calmed him "There is a consequence for stopping time. You must live it twice over." what did that mean?
# "Twice over?" Stephen was unable to fathom what was being said, his mind still wandering to exotic locals with scorpions and sphinx.
# "If you stop the watch you find all those around you frozen. you are alone with your thoughts, for the better or for the worse."
# Gramps continued "You will have run of the earth, go where you will, eat what you wish, borrow what you need, then reset the watch..."
# He paused "...once the watch is reset you see a vision of your life. if the watch was stopped for an hour your vision will last an hour..."
# He swallowed hard "...your vision will be of the last hour of your life as it would have been had you not stopped time."
Friday, June 19, 2009
The Alcove - Chapter 2 -
# #twitterfiction The Alcove - Chapter 2 -
# Removing his prize he ran through the rain toward the rear entrance to the servant's quarters, he had to get out of the blowing weather.
# As he sprinted to shelter, his mind flashed back to his youth, carefree and light - filled with delight at the hidden knowledge of the wall.
# The old estate no doubt had many trinkets and childhood treasures stowed and long since forgotten in the multitude of hiding places within.
# The sounds of Stephen's movements were obscured by the weather that battered the swaying trees and reflected off the staunch buildings.
# Closing the door behind him he moved to the table and placed his treasure in the center of the table. Forty three years was a long time.
# Stephen's fingers trembled as he popped the lid off of the tin. The ticking now drown out the sound of the storm outside, it was still here!
# The pocket watch had been handed down from his grandfather, to his father, and now it was his. He had waited till his dad had passed.
# His father had warned him that if he were to use it too soon he would face the wrath that only those tiny hands had wreaked upon his dad.
# Grandpa had been a positive man, minding his own business and constantly reminding others mind theirs. So many fond memories, now it's mine.
# Stephen marveled at the hands as they spun with perfect precision. The finish was untarnished with age as the tiny hands moved backward.
# The curse of the thing was obscured by it's overwhelming beauty, he felt drawn to it, his gaze unwavering. It was beautiful, he knew better.
# He felt compelled to wind it out of sheer habit, his father had passed the instruction down to him in the most somber of tones:
# "This pocket watch NEVER needs to be wound, stopping the hands of this watch will stop time itself, it caused my father nothing but pain."
# Father always kept the watch hidden, and when grandpa died father vowed it would not be used again during his lifetime.
# Stephen swore an oath, an oath he had kept.
# Until tonight.
# Mere mention of the watch made father livid with righteous indignation "Some things should not be tampered with by mortals!" he would say.
# Stephen had grieved his father's passing, and returned to his childhood home that now felt empty, cavernous, cold and quiet. Too quiet.
# There would have been no sound at all save the ticking of the watch his focus loosened and he realized he was still in full rain garb.
# Placing the watch in his pocket he took off his hooded poncho and retired to his bed his mind racing with possibility. He gazed at it again.
# Removing his prize he ran through the rain toward the rear entrance to the servant's quarters, he had to get out of the blowing weather.
# As he sprinted to shelter, his mind flashed back to his youth, carefree and light - filled with delight at the hidden knowledge of the wall.
# The old estate no doubt had many trinkets and childhood treasures stowed and long since forgotten in the multitude of hiding places within.
# The sounds of Stephen's movements were obscured by the weather that battered the swaying trees and reflected off the staunch buildings.
# Closing the door behind him he moved to the table and placed his treasure in the center of the table. Forty three years was a long time.
# Stephen's fingers trembled as he popped the lid off of the tin. The ticking now drown out the sound of the storm outside, it was still here!
# The pocket watch had been handed down from his grandfather, to his father, and now it was his. He had waited till his dad had passed.
# His father had warned him that if he were to use it too soon he would face the wrath that only those tiny hands had wreaked upon his dad.
# Grandpa had been a positive man, minding his own business and constantly reminding others mind theirs. So many fond memories, now it's mine.
# Stephen marveled at the hands as they spun with perfect precision. The finish was untarnished with age as the tiny hands moved backward.
# The curse of the thing was obscured by it's overwhelming beauty, he felt drawn to it, his gaze unwavering. It was beautiful, he knew better.
# He felt compelled to wind it out of sheer habit, his father had passed the instruction down to him in the most somber of tones:
# "This pocket watch NEVER needs to be wound, stopping the hands of this watch will stop time itself, it caused my father nothing but pain."
# Father always kept the watch hidden, and when grandpa died father vowed it would not be used again during his lifetime.
# Stephen swore an oath, an oath he had kept.
# Until tonight.
# Mere mention of the watch made father livid with righteous indignation "Some things should not be tampered with by mortals!" he would say.
# Stephen had grieved his father's passing, and returned to his childhood home that now felt empty, cavernous, cold and quiet. Too quiet.
# There would have been no sound at all save the ticking of the watch his focus loosened and he realized he was still in full rain garb.
# Placing the watch in his pocket he took off his hooded poncho and retired to his bed his mind racing with possibility. He gazed at it again.
The Alcove - Chapter 1 -
# #twitterfiction The Alcove - Chapter 1 -
# - Original Twitter Fiction by Jay Martens -
# It was a dark and stormy night and all had headed for slumber save the curmudgeonly old man who wrestled with his thoughts. Tonight it goes.
# slowly the clouds enshrouded the moon on it's leisurely journey to the horizon, appearing much larger than the sun its light glistened .
# The rhythm of the rain lulled Stephen's eyelids closed, he fought to stay alert and continue his exploration of the garden.
# 'Tonight is the last chance I have to rid myself of this burden once and for all.' he thought as he continued on. Tonight it goes.
# the mud now sloshed above his shoeline and invaded the space between his toes, but he didn't notice the prize he hunted consumed his mind.
# it had been years since he had visited this site and the landscape seemed different, the rain didn't help as the downpour obscured his view.
# The estate had always remained in the family and could be traced back eight generations, his childhood had played out on this very land.
# Stephen sensed he was near it, the terrain flooding back into his memory, parting the brush along the wall he groped for a loose brick.
# Thunder rolled in the distance as his wrinkled fingers stopped dead, he leaned in closer blocking out the sound of the rain. could it be?
# The ticking was unmistakable - 'how many years had it been?' he knew it was 43 years, 43 long years. he had envisioned this day many times.
# Scanning the brush around him Stephen looked for a rock or something hard to reopen the decades old vault. grabbing a rock he bashed the wall
# - Original Twitter Fiction by Jay Martens -
# It was a dark and stormy night and all had headed for slumber save the curmudgeonly old man who wrestled with his thoughts. Tonight it goes.
# slowly the clouds enshrouded the moon on it's leisurely journey to the horizon, appearing much larger than the sun its light glistened .
# The rhythm of the rain lulled Stephen's eyelids closed, he fought to stay alert and continue his exploration of the garden.
# 'Tonight is the last chance I have to rid myself of this burden once and for all.' he thought as he continued on. Tonight it goes.
# the mud now sloshed above his shoeline and invaded the space between his toes, but he didn't notice the prize he hunted consumed his mind.
# it had been years since he had visited this site and the landscape seemed different, the rain didn't help as the downpour obscured his view.
# The estate had always remained in the family and could be traced back eight generations, his childhood had played out on this very land.
# Stephen sensed he was near it, the terrain flooding back into his memory, parting the brush along the wall he groped for a loose brick.
# Thunder rolled in the distance as his wrinkled fingers stopped dead, he leaned in closer blocking out the sound of the rain. could it be?
# The ticking was unmistakable - 'how many years had it been?' he knew it was 43 years, 43 long years. he had envisioned this day many times.
# Scanning the brush around him Stephen looked for a rock or something hard to reopen the decades old vault. grabbing a rock he bashed the wall
Starting the Journey
I had the idea to write a novel using Twitter.
This is the result of that idea.
After a chapter is completed I will reorder the tweets and post them here. I don't have any external notes or outlines, just winging it.
I hope you enjoy,
Jay Mart
This is the result of that idea.
After a chapter is completed I will reorder the tweets and post them here. I don't have any external notes or outlines, just winging it.
I hope you enjoy,
Jay Mart
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